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Comment by Riponlady:
Ther feels like there is a story here but as a pic I would crop it more at the bottom. Good capture!

Lesser Blue Heron, Water is His Home
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Comment by KarenNfld:
There's a lot of noise in the photo, a sif you took it with a long zoom and/or tried to sharpen it too much. If it were more in focus with little grain it would be a good picture.

A "Pict-O-Graph" for you!
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Comment by sherpet:
Clever.....

Lesser Blue Heron, Water is His Home
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Comment by hotpasta:
it's just so over processed...I can only imagine how well this would have done if it had better resolution, because the colours look amazing

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Comment by Gunnsi:
Healing hands

I'm going to eat the next car that comes around that curve
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Comment by Neuferland:
I love these types of shots and to capture them naturally, not set up is even more fantastic!

A "Pict-O-Graph" for you!
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Comment by Hawkeye:
Very good idea!

Something Tickle Your Fancy?
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Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting incorporation of the feather with the heels ... well done.

Composition:
This is not bad. The problem areas have already been raised and this is the grate behind the subject and the flooring. Both of which are distracting elements.

Subject:
Meets the challenge.

Technical (Colour and light):
Goof lighting ... reasonable colour and good focus. With a change of background you could have played more with colour I think.

To grow its vote?:
Think about where you are shooting. I have find it extremely important to not have a busy background or base (floor) for the picture unless it is intentional.

Summary:
Good pic .. well done for this challenge. And so far away from what you have been shooting .... never be afraid of trying new things.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

A "Pict-O-Graph" for you!
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Comment by BeeCee:
ummm.... shoing nails? Just kidding!

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Comment by philup:
WOW..This is very cool! Your detail is great.