Distant Tree
by EricMGB1974

Comment by connie:
VERY INTERESTING!! NICE JOB!

Distant Tree
by EricMGB1974

Comment by crewmnd:
interesting perspective, but doesn't work for me as a subject

Distant Tree
by EricMGB1974

Comment by bmartuch:
Nice picture but I think the tree should have been in focus.

Distant Tree
by EricMGB1974

Comment by pineapple:
This is quite an exciting photo. The near and far perspective works very well. 8.

Distant Tree
by EricMGB1974

Comment by vtruan:
oh my two trees....

Euclidean Photography
by EricMGB1974

Comment by Beach_mel:
Really like the tonal quality of this!

Euclidean Photography
by EricMGB1974

Comment by drydoc:
And the inspiration for the next challenge!!!? Beautiful tones. BOL 8 here

Shore at Dusk
by EricMGB1974

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club.

I think you chose a subject for this challenge with a lot of potential. The pastel colors in the background are very effective at keeping the image subject neutral. However, being lighter than the shoreline, my eyes tend to want to rest on the rocks, which is your intent. But the rocks don't have enough punch to them and could be lightened just a bit. I think a little work in post processing with either curves or levels could help balance this image. Once the rocks have more pop, I would suggest that you try a few different crops (less sky, remove the two boats on the ends, or both) and see how the mood of the image changes. You have a good eye for composition and I look forward to seeing more of your entries.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

Euclidean Photography
by EricMGB1974

Comment by littlegett:
nice idea, only I don't care for so much blank space outside the window. The building seems flat also.

Euclidean Photography
by EricMGB1974

Comment by DeniseBernadette:
I like this a lot.. I think the tones you used work very well.