Blinded By The White
by colnil79

Comment by OneSweetSin:
Greetings of Critique Club

Beautiful and simple. Nicely fits the challenge.

Your lighting works here.

I do question two things in your composition first the stem. Would the photo have stood on its own without it and second question is why did you use a textured background it is distracting. I would have rather seen a smooth background.

Overall you have a nice macro going here and hope to see more from you.

Anna

Blinded By The White
by colnil79

Comment by madison461:
Wish this were in color

Blinded By The White
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Comment by secondglantz:
Nicely done. There is a nice contrast between the flowers and the background.

Blinded By The White
by colnil79

Comment by Ivory:
Nice compositon, well done.

Blinded By The White
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Comment by undecorated:
Oh my! my eyes are going funny!

Blinded By The White
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Comment by persimon:
Very nice. I'd like to have seen a little color in the stem. 7

Blinded By The White
by colnil79

Comment by GentleSoul:
This is a really nice shot. I like your use of the step as a leading line into the photo, and the *really* white flower on top. I think it would have been even better if your background didn't have a texture like that. Something smooth (but not shiny) may have been better.

Blinded By The White
by colnil79

Comment by ashs:
Nice shot. I really like the flower and the stem. I only wish the front flower was sharper.

Blinded By The White
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Comment by olddj:
dark detracts from the "light on white", otherwise nicely done

Blinded By The White
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Comment by Elaine:
The stem is very distracting to me. I think this would have been better with the flower and stem removed, leaving just the one flower positioned as it is.