3D
by Paige

Comment by Jeileen:
Different.
Is this San Francisco?

3D
by Paige

Comment by dsidwell:
Nice perspective from this famous bridge. I appreciate it's uniqueness and love the cable lines.

3D
by Paige

Comment by NicNic101:
Awesome! Love the view!

3D
by Paige

Comment by toeknee:
This is nice but something isn't working for me. Maybe too busy of a background. Perhaps a more shallow depth of field to take the background down a notch.

Eggshell White
by Paige

Comment by jmsetzler:
this is a very interesting composition and the lighting is also nice... there is some minor 'rainbow' effect that I can't really explain around this egg. I'm not really sure what may be causing this, but a conversion to greyscale would probably make it less apparent.. - setzler

Eggshell White
by Paige

Comment by kellie:
good job

Eggshell White
by Paige

Comment by Chuckie:
nice job, i like the idea with the egg, the white on white is a good usage of color

Hiding from the Pain
by Paige

Comment by BAMartin:
Critique Club Critique

(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) This is a great photograph. I love the the compositional use of framing of her face with her hair and her arms. I am a little bothered that you have cut off part of her head and part of her arm, but maybe that tight crop added some strength to the photograph. (I would like to see it both ways to be sure).

I have read some of your comments regarding the lip gloss. I have to agree that this is the one main distraction.

(2) BACKGROUND There is not much background here, and so nothing to distract from the subject.

(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL The DOF is very good, all of the important parts are in sharp focus. Exposure is right on. I notice that your exposure time was one second. Nice decision to do it that way as opposed to on-camera-flash, which would have ruined this photograph.

(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL Your post processing is good. Wonderful use of duotone. Is very reminiscent of an old movie.

(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE You have done a fantastic job of meeting the challenge. Your model is very good too. I wonder how she managed to hold still for an entire second. Its hard not to get movement in a photogrraph like this.

(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO The subject here is wonderful. The way you executed it is great. This was one of the best of the dispair pics. I am happy to see your score reflecting this. Well done!

Eggshell White
by Paige

Comment by abh1:
Good minimalistic composition

Eggshell White
by Paige

Comment by Amiee:
Nice image and shadow effect. Good job.