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PaigeComment by Silver Fox: 3D by Paige
Hi Paige,
Critique by Silver Fox
First, let me congratulate you on this photograph. It scored pretty high on the Challenge and proved to be a favorite.
The composition is excellent and has great depth of field and contrast.
The colors are excellent with the blue sky and hills in the background and then the buildings of the City and the blue waters of the bay.
In my opinion being able to get the color of the steel cables into your photograph were an âextraâ for the viewer to âseeâ.
Unfortunately for me, I did not see this the first time around, and I only gave you a four.
I also think the addition of the Steel Column at the right is a magnificent show of power and strength.
Focus: thereâs nothing to say, everything is fine, the cables look softly in focus, the steel column is great and everything else is just dandy, a great job.
For lighting â what can one say, itâs a daytime shot, the sun is out, thereâs smog around, you do the best with what you have, and thatâs
exactly what youâve done here.
Iâve checked your home page out and you have some great photographs there, so keep up the good work and keep having fun. Hope this piece of work finds a place on a wall in your home.
Regards,
Ed
Ps. Please start giving us your aperture/shutter info.as it would help a lot in our critique's. Thanks
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