My Only Sunshine!
by lkn4truth

Comment by fencekicker:
I like this photo, and the title. :) I think it would have been enhanced quite a bit if you had cropped off the yellow backlighting on the right and the right half of her head. This would draw our attention much more to her eyes and secondly to her hands/camera. As far as darkening... mostly the ear and earing are a bit distracting; some adjustments might help those features to not be as outstanding. Also the crop would help here too, imo, because at the moment her earing is at one of those rule of thirds intersections and cropping the right would move it well away from there.

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by Sunshyne:
Neat shot - meets the challenge well.

The Old Number One
by lkn4truth

Comment by UNTITLED:
Very crisp and great color saturation. Nicely done!

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by nordicgirl:
Like the way you use your focus.

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by pmichaud:
Nice colors but the focus seems to be a little off. Very cute model :)

My Only Sunshine!
by lkn4truth

Comment by Ragga2000:
Nice picture although you should have made it a little darker to avoid so much details in the woman.... but, if I almost close my eyes when watching it, then it is very nice... (could leave some details on the hands and camera) - IMHO... good luck :o)

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by H700256:
I like the photo. I think I'd like to the see the girl in focus more than the doll. Nice job

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by sjturner:
imo focus would have worked beetr on the models face rather than the doll

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
Nice pastels

Memories
by lkn4truth

Comment by hotpasta:
the point of focus is all wrong here...it seems to be on the blue cloth...I would have focused on the girl's face for sure