Eyes of Innocenceby
Mr_BondComment by Artyste: Hello, and greetings from the Critique Club. What follows is my best attempt to Critique this photo from a DPC voter's point of view. I'll do my best, but please excuse any comments that may be unintentionally rude or insulting.
Initial Thoughts
Something a little too artificial about this..
Composition/Content
Compositionally, there's not much I can comment on, It's got a nice feel. However, the model, to me, lacks a comfortability factor which makes this shot seem a little artificial and too .. fabricated.
Background
A nice neutral background, no complaints
Camera Work/Technical
Lacks a touch of the sharpness that most DPC voters tend to love, and doesn't have that "intentionally soft" feel. This is also contributed by the lack of contrast, giving the model a very flat look without much depth.
Digital Processing
No information, but I would suggest working on contrast and trying to bring some depth into your model. Darken the shadows, bring out the highlights in the skin tones more, etc.. also, some work with USM to sharpen the photo up a little more will help too.
Fits the Challenge
No arguements here, it does that well.
My Opinion of the Photo
A nice attempt, but a little more natural emotion from the model and less discomfort would give a more natural feel.
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