First Day
by manic35

Comment by Falc:
Oh brilliant - just that table in the upper left needs flipping. I'd also prefer to see the model looking into the frame as opposed to out of the frame.

First Day
by manic35

Comment by samtrundle:
Whoa... I almost think you cranked the saturation a little far (the almost neon shirt is a bit of a giveaway) but nevertheless I like the colours and the composition (aside from the little bit of black in the top right corner. 9.

First Day
by manic35

Comment by gerakdepan:
This is good. Perhaps if you widened the angle and make the subject smaller in the sea of red chairs the sense of too early would be even greater. Very good composition with chairs diagonally lined. Top of the picture could have been cropped more. I'm also still learning. Hope you find his helpful.

First Day
by manic35

Comment by funkyfunk:
Excellent capture.

First Day
by manic35

Comment by Jutilda:
WOW the intense colors and sharpness is amazing. Great leading line with all of the rows of the chairs. His blue shirt mimics the tone of the wall. I'd work on his skin tones and make them yes yellow, or maybe you wanted his arms to match the gold of the chair arms. Still - a vivid eye catching image. Nice job.

First Day
by manic35

Comment by sestevens:
Good concept, enjoy the photo. Two recommendations. Lost of focus on the first row of seats, would consider cropping just above the "desks" of the first row. Secondly, is the top of the photography. The black sliver of ceiling showing up on the right hand side, combined with the askew vertical lines are distracting. Rotating your photo with some more acute cropping could really increase the quality of your photo.

The Pride of My Husband's Slot Car Collection
by manic35

Comment by tpoc:
i would really have loved to see that portion of the car be revealed from shadow instead of a black cloth...

The Pride of My Husband's Slot Car Collection
by manic35

Comment by runin2dson:
without the title, the picture does not shout of collections

The Pride of My Husband's Slot Car Collection
by manic35

Comment by Uusilehto:
Excellent! Great lighting and idea.
Deserves a 9

The Pride of My Husband's Slot Car Collection
by manic35

Comment by rick13601:
Very cool pic...I know its a model, but I love the spot light and the drape over the car. It makes the model appear larger than it is. For the collection theme, I wonder if you could have achieved the same effect by using more than one car.