Abandon
by temba

Comment by kiwinick:
ok good idea I would have cloned out the power point on the wall it sticks out 4

Abandon
by temba

Comment by shoelessaj:
Right on!! Don't really know enough to give advice on the picture itself, but I do like the subject.

Abandon
by temba

Comment by amandalore:
I would have photoshopped out the outlet, I like your composition and idea

Success is: Keeping your head while all around are losing theirs
by temba

Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Great colours ... good DOF .. almost could be used as one of those inspirational posters they have in the workplace.

Composition:
the head of the seed is almost perfectly on thirds .. which technically is kinda cool.

Subject:
Without the title ... does this meet the challenge .. not sure .. but I think that this does on other levels really well.

Technical (Colour and light):
I love the colours you have captured so well.

To grow its vote?:
only take shots that meet the knowledge and understanding of success of the majority ... none of these left field/out of the box looks.

Summary:
I think you did great.... keep it up.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Turqouise and Gold Detail
by temba

Comment by KGregory:
Great minimalist approach! The cropping really accenuates the architectural details. I love the shadows cast by the designs on the righthand side. The exposure looks good. My only advice is that the colors seem to have an overall warm cast - perhaps it could be cooled down.

Turqouise and Gold Detail
by temba

Comment by MeGoobie:
I like that your subject shows contrast while connecting itself; the pattern is difference from the normal windows and yet they are both of the same shape and size. Crisp, clear... contrasting colors. I would have enhanced contrast more.

Success is: Keeping your head while all around are losing theirs
by temba

Comment by Ben:
Not a bad sot at all.

Turqouise and Gold Detail
by temba

Comment by Ben:
Nice shot, the sun really lights it up.

Turqouise and Gold Detail
by temba

Comment by KarenNfld:
Doesn't look to be quite in focus.

Turqouise and Gold Detail
by temba

Comment by Djabordjabor:
Nope, it's not doing anything for me. It's very uninteresting.