ghostly appearance
by Nick-S

Comment by Germaine:
It certainly makes me ask, "What's going on?" Not very appealing to look at though.

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by LoudDog:
Greetings from the critique club Nick!

First off, DPC allows you to have a maximum image width or height of 640 pix. It̢۪s in your best interest to use all of that so people can see your image in all it̢۪s glory. That might be part of the reason for the low score. You chose the point of view definition of perspective, as I did, and I think that is also part of the reason for the low score/placement as most people seemed to be looking for the distance/size definition.
Positives: I think the composition is great, text book rule of thirds. The colors are really good as well and the nice deep DOF works perfect. I love the expression on the kid̢۪s face.
Negatives: The lighting on his fact is a little off. Turn him into the sun a little more and the shadows disappear. Image size as noted. His clothes are a little loud or off, but I don̢۪t know if I̢۪d call that a negative.
Congrats on your first entry! I hope it doesn̢۪t discourage you from entering again as it looks like you have a great eye. I hope you find this helpful, feel free to PM me if you have any questions of my review.

Message edited by author 2005-09-23 18:35:38.

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by kylh:
ROAR
lol
i love thos kid expression
maybe if the clots matched more
remember if you use a modle u must notice te detail in them too

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by stek:
this is nice. i like the colors. nice job.

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by TG73:
Interesting angle. That kid looks angry!!

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by madison461:
hmmm....ok.

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by maralomar:
nice frame

Biker dude.
by Nick-S

Comment by Sherri1209:
Too cool