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Delicate flower
11/06/2005 02:59:35 PM
Delicate flower
by CamMan

Comment by CEJ:
Hello from the Critique Club!

I have studied your image and have the following to offer:

Composition/perspective - this image has a lot of appeal and could be a much stronger entry with a few changes perhaps. The flower, although not dead center, could be a little more to the left to really nail down application of the rule of thirds. If the crop was a little different to either get the full bud at the top in the shot or remove it completely would also have helped. Your angle to the subject is very good and the ratio between subject and background is very nice. If the main subject was in focus the DoF would work very nicely.

Color - wow! This image has a very strong palette with vibrant and alive colors. The contrasts between in flower colors and flower to background works very nicely. A small boost in contrast may have brought them out a bit more even without hurting the image at all.

Lighting - it appears only natural light was used. The only choice here. You have no bright spots and everything appears to be fairly uniform. Well done.

Challenge requirements - this meets the challenge requirements quite well. Showing just enough of the inside of the flower without pointing directly into it really helps.

Overall/my opinion - where this image falls down is the focus. Applying some sharpening and/or USM may have helped to make it look not so fuzzy. The background is ok, it is the flower that should be clear. If this had been, I think this would have fared much better in the challenge.
.... # 6 is smokin'
11/03/2005 05:46:53 PM
.... # 6 is smokin'
by CamMan

Comment by Elaine:
I think this would work better if all the balls were still except one.
.... # 6 is smokin'
11/02/2005 06:57:27 PM
.... # 6 is smokin'
by CamMan

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
all I can give you is that the colors are nice, other than that since the pix is so out of focus, and the challenge was a shutter speed, crispness is saught after.
.... # 6 is smokin'
11/02/2005 09:45:04 AM
.... # 6 is smokin'
by CamMan

Comment by JCYRHS:
rear sync flash to bring out the balls would have benefitted this photo
.... # 6 is smokin'
11/02/2005 12:22:22 AM
.... # 6 is smokin'
by CamMan

Comment by AzCKelly:
Excellent job!! I can really feel their motion, almost like they are flying!!
Photographer found comment helpful.
Delicate flower
11/01/2005 02:43:27 PM
Delicate flower
by CamMan

Comment by shaunjchang:
It' har to tell what is in focus
Photographer found comment helpful.
Delicate flower
10/29/2005 07:28:53 PM
Delicate flower
by CamMan

Comment by mihaibadic:
off focus
Photographer found comment helpful.
Delicate flower
10/28/2005 05:33:53 PM
Delicate flower
by CamMan

Comment by DeniseBernadette:
Would be better if it had been a bit sharper.
Photographer found comment helpful.
Delicate flower
10/28/2005 03:45:02 PM
Delicate flower
by CamMan

Comment by loriprophoto:
Needs a point of focus, very pretty flower. Also the bud should either be excluded entirely or show a bit more IMHO. A bit more contrast would also help to make it pop a bit more.
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Delicate flower
10/28/2005 01:31:45 PM
Delicate flower
by CamMan

Comment by verg:
I love the color in this shot. Nice vibrancy.
Photographer found comment helpful.
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