Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by MarkRob:
you got your head shadow in the bottom of the shot....

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by mcrael:
A little less light on the subjects might have resulted in some more color in this photo. You caught your shadow too!

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by titotapado:
shadow in bottom kills it.

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by fluffy:
looks tasty fluffy

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by Antithesis:
This would be very nice, except for the shadow in the lower middle. It really detracts.

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by inspzil:
Your shadow in the pic is a definite downer.

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by ambaker:
Nice idea... However, the shadow at the bottom is distracting, and with the two forks and two spoons it looks like you are going to share... The pic might work better with the silverware napkin, and whatever it is at the upper left corner, out of the picture. That way the focus would be entirely on the tempting food. Nice job on the whipped cream. So often people wind up burning out the whites in a high contrast picture like this. 8

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by Natasha:
One fork would have made this more on the gluttony scale!

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by wingy:
not a bad subject, but the composition seems like it needs work. Perhaps just shooting the cake would have been more effective.. the silverware especially seems to detract from the shot. 4

Cheeeese Cake
by jpb56ny

Comment by smshats:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6 , Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6 , Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5 , Total Averaged Rating 6 . smshats