Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by shutterpuppy:
Nice. Like the lighting and the composition. The pose is also very fun while still carrying an abstract quality. Wish the DOF was a little deeper.

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by hanneke:
I like the way the eye gets attention, but her breasts are in the full light, so my attention goes there very fast.

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by aKiwi:
Very nice. I find the lighting on the torso overpowers the image a little. Normally the face should be the focal point and the bright area attracts too much attention. The light on the face is perfect. Moving your light further away and up a bit would reduce the effect.
Love the model, and the catchlight in the eye is great.

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by Transit:
Nicely done.

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by LeeD:
The lighting on the stomach just below the breast is a bit harsh and borderline blown out. Beautiful model, excellent pose, good composition.

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by kevip6:
great shot, the lighting and composition are excellent - 8

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by Makka:
I love the lighting in this. It really highlights the girl.Perhaps I would of liked a bit of dodging on her eyes just to bring them out a touch. Well done!

Sony Style`
by superscrub99

Comment by cpanaioti:
Interesting idea however I think it would work better if an entire letter were in focus and the angle of view was more looking along the word. To me that would make for a more dynamic image.

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by doug61853:
I like this model. Great use of light and shadows!

Succubus
by superscrub99

Comment by tonyv:
I wonder if a wall or something similar would have made this more mysterious. Hiding behind her arm looks uncomfortable.