This is a shot I took at disney of my daughter and her grandparents!
by moonjeong

Comment by hanneke:
a bit busy IMO

This is a shot I took at disney of my daughter and her grandparents!
by moonjeong

Comment by myra:
has a snapshot feel to it and a little oof.

The proudest uncle in the world!
by moonjeong

Comment by mandrade:
beautiful pic... however the child facing forward would have made a greater impact. Nice work.

This is a shot I took at disney of my daughter and her grandparents!
by moonjeong

Comment by Tammer:
This is a nice family photo, but compared to other celebration entries in the challenge, it doesn't hold my attention as well. I think perhaps because the three foreground people all have their backs to the viewer. had you taken this from the other side where I could see their expressions, I probably would have scored it higher.

This is a shot I took at disney of my daughter and her grandparents!
by moonjeong

Comment by Rikki:
um how come they're facing the wrong way?

The proudest uncle in the world!
by moonjeong

Comment by philup:
good job..!!

The proudest uncle in the world!
by moonjeong

Comment by neophyte:
Well composed and taken, nice example of theme, but the child needs to be facing the camera for this to have "impact"

The proudest uncle in the world!
by moonjeong

Comment by ClickNSee:
Nice...very nice! <9>

This is a shot I took at disney of my daughter and her grandparents!
by moonjeong

Comment by Maverick:
Family and good times are certainly valid reasons for celebration. However, there are a lot of problems with this shot imho. The background is quite busy. I really think this should have been shot from the front of the people, adding their faces and thus providing of a personal element imho. The lady at the side looks removed from the group -- its difficult to tell if she is meant to be in the shot or another tourist. Don't give up, keep trying and you will see improvement.

The proudest uncle in the world!
by moonjeong

Comment by Elaine:
I would like to see more of the baby's face, and the background is a little distracting. Good capture of the uncle, though.