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Comfort on hair ( or air ?)by LionsitalyComment by persimon: *Critique Club*
The first things I notice about this image are the specks or dust on your sensor. When you have a close-up like this with a lot of empty space, it is vital that you keep it clean.
The second thing I notice is the composition. The insect on the hair is very light and small. Maybe this would have worked better had the insec'ts wings pointed towards the lower right hand corner of the frame. I think cropping some of the empty space might have helped the insect not get lost in the space. I just don't get a feel that the composition is deliberate or thought out.
I think the colors and tiny details in the wings are points you would want to bring out. Perhaps a little sharpening might help in that area.
This is only your 9th challenge entry. Don't get discouraged. Just take your time and think about your subject. Think about what you are trying to convey and how best to present that to the rest of us. You might want to keep a lens cloth handy to wipe any dust off your lense while shooting. If your sensor is dirty, consider taking it to a camera shop and getting it cleaned.
Amy
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