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trtfeasorComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Without your photographer's comments, I would not know what this was.
As for the relationship to the challenge, I am also not sure how you have used a perspective to enhance the subject. By your horizon line, your subject was shot almost straight on. The photo isn't tilted enough to add any dramatic angle in my opinion, so the tilted horizon comes off as just a mistake.
the colors are dull and lacking something to really make it punch. The sky is just flat and also does not compliment the subject well.
I think your focus is soft, but ok enough that we can still see some detail in the subject, for example the little plant growing on top of it to the left.
Lighting to me just seems flat. Looks like it was just that kind of a day outside.
Overall the image doesn't scream 'cool perspective' to me, the subject is interesting, but not enough to hold my attention long, and the colors need a boost. Maybe some saturation of the blues would work? Something to play around with anyway.
~Heather~
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