Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by Inga_fang:
imo this needs a little more contrast

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by Commando303:
I love the title, I really like the shot. Good job.

Pagoda
by Elaine

Comment by thehitter:
nice balance

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by mkalandros:
I think the exposure and/or contrast needs to be higher for this. The milk should be whiter.

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by KarenNfld:
Neat, but image seems a little dull, maybe better lighting would make it brighter.

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by Tammer:
This reminds me of photos from the not so recent dairy challenge. I like the off centered composition. For me, I bet a bit more contrast would help boost the overall quality of the photo. I like that you chose to do this in black and white.

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by Falconuruguay:
Very Nice...

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by mimihoo:
It must be smth in this creation but I just don't see it :((

Don't Cry
by Elaine

Comment by Antanas:
Kity-kity-kity (she'll take care of it)...

Ivories
by Elaine

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

You have a very pleasant image for your entry in the Perspective Challenge. It certainly fits the Challenge well.

Technically, I'd suggest that a bit more of the keyboard be in focus. According to the numbers you provided, you took it in a fairly dark place and that 1/60 of a second shutter speed usually cries out for a tripod. Or at least something to brace your camera on. That, I think, would have made this image nice and crisp in the foreground. You might also consider bracketing your shots to find the best one.

Then, compositionally, while it has a nice progression of black and white to the very end, it could use a little something to stop the viewers eye and keep the viewer in the picture. It could be as simple as placing a flower or a ring on the keyboard. Experiment with placement, front to back.

It looks as if you are having fun with your DPC experience. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work.