mckinnon7.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by suemack:
Gorgeous shot!

mckinnon12.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by suemack:
Lovely warm lighting.

mckinnon14.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by suemack:
Adore this shot. Lovely relaxed pose and the most delightful grin. Good work!!

mckinnon3.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by JenniferDavidGA:
I like this better then the other bench shot. I would like to see more of the dress and less of the trees in the backgroud. Plus you cut off her foot. :)

mckinnon2.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by JenniferDavidGA:
You have to get all of the dress, that is the most important part. :) Otherwise this is a great setup.

mckinnon15.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by JenniferDavidGA:
This one is great too!!! I just wish it was a little more lit around her hair so you could see the details better. It can be fixed in PP. The pose here is great and again the look on her face is very natural.

mckinnon12.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by JenniferDavidGA:
This is my favorite of the bunch. The lighting is great and she looks relaxed and not to forced into the pose. All of the shots are great. I bet she is a happy bride. :)

Message edited by author 2007-08-12 21:13:10.

mckinnon4.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by fotomann_forever:
I agree with eug on all counts. The shallower DoF would help a lot. Also, hitting the bride with a flash or reflector would give the photo more punch.

mckinnon8.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by fotomann_forever:
Just pickin' nits mostly, but the shadow should be behind, not in front of the dress.

mckinnon8.jpg
by jerowe

Comment by TCGuru:
A couple of things that I don't like and a couple that I do :) I don't like the big thing in the background, if it was intended to be in the shot, I would have put it IN the shot. In the place it is, it just distracts from your lovely model :) I like that you caught the whole dress and didn't blow it out. I don't like her pose because it makes her upper arm look really really big. If you could just have her hold her arms out slightly from her body (perhaps have her raise the bouquet so her hands are right at her belly button) and have her turn just 15 degrees more towards the camera. Her hair and headpiece are lovely and show well here. Try to have your subject tilt their head juuuuuust slightly one side or the other to bring the eyes on to different plains :) whew! I hope this helps LOL :)