A "Dirty" Tribute to Larus
by jerowe

Comment by LN13:
Nicely done and kudos to your model for being a good sport.

A "Dirty" Tribute to Larus
by jerowe

Comment by robinssong:
Excellent! I like your take on this one!

A "Dirty" Tribute to Larus
by jerowe

Comment by lovethelight:
this is an interesting spin on the shot but I was under the impression we were supposed to emulate it as closely as possible and this seems like its completely opposite with the dark colors and white colored dirt. On its own in a free study or something I would have scored this higher I think. I love the detail in her skin and lips. awesome shot

A "Dirty" Tribute to Larus
by jerowe

Comment by ZeppKash:
sandy. and scary.

Transition
by jerowe

Comment by violinist123:
Critique Club feedback:

These are nicely lit and composed shots, and the triptych approach is something different to look at. While all technically competent, they lack any mass appeal and would have a hard time competing in a Free Study. Still you've captured some nice moments here and are obviously a capable wedding photog.

Good work!

All Gone :(
by jerowe

Comment by WriteHeart:
Beautiful! Especially with the petals trailing behind her. Nicely done.

All Gone :(
by jerowe

Comment by FocusPoint:
Eye color... fantastic :)

All Gone :(
by jerowe

Comment by SDW:
Lovely girl and great photograph. I like the the background a lot.

All Gone :(
by jerowe

Comment by chip_k:
Very cool shot! My only suggestion is to crop tighter on the left and on top. Her face is definitley the subject and it will look better up and to the left.

All Gone :(
by jerowe

Comment by mia67:
Beautiful girl, and very good photo. Love the background, simple.