Worth Waiting For
by jerowe

Comment by FotoMunki:
Great shot! Really represents the concept of not moving. Great DOF! Nicely done. Good luck.

Untouched Beauty
by jerowe

Comment by agenkin:
Untouched? I guess you are not counting the make-up. :)

Worth Waiting For
by jerowe

Comment by sevilduvarci:
great DOF, 8.

Untouched Beauty
by jerowe

Comment by lifternessjt:
Gorgeous girl. Great pic.

Worth Waiting For
by jerowe

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Good dog!!! 8

Worth Waiting For
by jerowe

Comment by mmckenna:
i love this shot

Untouched Beauty
by jerowe

Comment by Jason_Cross:
This is a fantastic portrait. I love the pose an the natural smile.

Untouched Beauty
by jerowe

Comment by zed3:
not enough tech experience to comment, voting on what i like and how i react to the photo .

Untouched Beauty
by jerowe

Comment by hotpasta:
excellent..love the blue t shirt here as it complements her blonde

Abandoned Hope
by jerowe

Comment by TooCool:
From the Critique Club:

First of all I would like to say that you have a very beautiful model and I would love to have the opportunity to shoot her. This shot begs for my what I like what I don't like treatment so here goes...

What I like: Compositionally, this shot is right on. You have your model in one third of the frame. This doesn't exactly follow the rule of thirds but is very close and works well. I love how you have your model posed and her expression. I love how it appears that your lighting surrounds or floods the area that the model is in, however...

What I don't like: This to me looks a tad bit overprocessed. Please remember that this is only my opinion and I'm a bit old school when it comes to post processing. The circle of light around your model almost looks to perfect as if it was created in the p/p. The fade off from lit to shadow is too dramatic. It doesn't look real. Your model also looks a little plastic. This is probably a result of the neat image. I don't know exactly why, it may be a combination of the lighting and the use of neat image, but her clothes don't look 'real'. There is a bit of fuzziness to them that makes it look surreal. For this critiquer, this doesn't work all that well. The last thing I would have to say I was drawn to in a negative way is her eyes. They look dull or dead. Even the slightest bit of catch light in her eyes would have added a lot of feeling to the shot.

Overall, it's a nice shot. With a little less in the post processing and a touch of catch light this could be a great shot.

Yours
TC