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violetaComment by sfalice: Greetings from the Critique Club
Oh dear,Oh dear, Oh dear! I have read your comments and it appears some of our voters have limited vocabularies and lack the ability to define words.
Okay, nothing we can do about that now. This is a totally appealing image of a little kid with a (sort of) cheesy smile. He's too cute to make it come off, really. Nevertheless, it, in my opinion,
does meet the Challenge.
Compositionally, I like it, mostly. The door handle is intrusive; it would have been better if you could have blocked it off. And of course, for framing purposes, you can do that now. This image cries to be framed and shown off. I do like the muted white of the door. Perhaps you could blur the whole thing out so just a suggestion of light remains.
Then, the child's chin is close to the edge of the frame. You might think about leaving more space there so he doesn't look cut off.
I'll look forward to seeing more of your entries in DPChallenge.