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by jab119

Comment by lmhr:
this is a nice image. I wonder how much you could've gain with that beautiful face in a not so distracting enviorment. good job, though.

LM

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Comment by aussie:
Lovely portrait shot. The composition is excellent. You chose a great place to photograph her. I really like her hat with her hair pulled back off her face. Well done.

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Comment by PTLParsons:
There are some places on the top left corner of the wall that are distracting. Would hve looked better if candles had been lit. Too dark. The shine of the candle sticks doesn't come thru because of the darkness. Candles should have been same length, so they would slant at same line with the candle sticks. Maybe this sounds like nitpicking, but it is the kind of attention you need to give to details. This makes a big difference in a regular photo and an outstanding photo. PTL 4

Lefty
by jab119

Comment by bod:
While the focus is good, and composition is okay, the image doesn't have anything to really grab the attention. It doesn't say anything to me beyond 'snapshot of a hand'.
The same shot in black & white may provoke more interest, though I feel that it is probably overlit. A few strong shadows may add to the image.
Above average but not great to me.

Lefty
by jab119

Comment by lisae:
Interesting camera angle, but the composition is a bit flat. The hand seems to take up too much of the photo for me to absorb it all. The light is a bit too strong, also, and the background makes me want to know what's behind there... a bed?

It's kind of an interesting shot, but doesn't really work for me.

Lefty
by jab119

Comment by PTLParsons:
Left side a little out of focus. And hand a little red. But I do like the nice close up crop. The way the small finger is posed it looks way out of proportion to the rest of the hand. It appears if it were to be straightened out it would be longer than the middle finger, as does the ring finger. But that's just my opinion.

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Comment by ChrisW123:
Boring... Maybe you should have lit them? Needs something but not sure what.

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Comment by Shiiizzzam:
Great balance using 4's. Color, angle and crop are good:) = 8 shiiizzzam

Lefty
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Comment by kandyj:
Maybe a little rotation to be able to crop out the upper right corner, a bit distracting. Otherwise nice photo.

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Comment by GeneralE:
No CAD plotter? Nice to see someone still knows how to use a straightedge.