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Comment by autool:
Nice shot, the bannister and stair rails compliment the subject in this composition. I think a little more contrast would help it pop. Don't ever do anything to make your model camera shy as she is great. If she is you, then stay in control!

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Comment by kandyj:
The bottom right is a little distracting, but overall great shot. Gave it a 9.

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Comment by wingy:
The whole shot has a sort of artificial feel to it. The unnatural pose, the empty picture frame, the perfect facial complexion.. I almost feel surprised to see little fuzzies stuck to the gloves and shirt because of the touched up department store catalog perfection of everything else in the shot. That has it's plusses and minuses. 6

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Comment by LindaLee:
The photo of her is wonderful, and the soft lighting looks great in my opinion, but the background really draws my eyes away from her face.

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Comment by magnetic9999:
very good photo. just need to lower the high lights in the levels a bit

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Comment by Azrifel:
Nice composition, good exposure. The images looks like it is softened somewhat, nice result. The gloves cover the skin of the hands, rendering it as neutral as the sweater, therefore all focus is on the face (good in my opinion) the hat does the same whit the hair. Love the eyes.

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Comment by hardwaybets:
I am not convinced that this was the best angle or POV for this image. You have subject with stunning eyes! Why not a tighter image and have her either look up at the camera lens or look down at it? Good luck!

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Comment by justine:
Pretty girl....wow, nice eyes, skin. Good focus, tones, and light. I only dislike the sleeve with a hole in it!! Crop that out, this girl is sooo cute.

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Comment by analog:
Not altogether bad, but...

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Comment by Onie:
Good shot. I like the idea of taking this on the stairs, great idea. My eyes keep focusing on the elbow in the front and how the shirt sicks out between the rails. If at all possible I would like to see this done with the camera at a different angle.