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| 01/23/2003 08:42:55 AM |
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| 01/22/2003 11:02:18 PM |
Uptown Park Blvdby jab119Comment by Wheeler1992: all the lights distract me, I know that you can't do anything about the lights but I am just giving you my first reaction |
| 01/22/2003 12:18:49 PM |
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| 01/22/2003 01:10:30 AM |
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| 01/21/2003 11:06:19 PM |
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| 01/21/2003 10:07:34 PM |
Winter Treesby jab119Comment by jimmsp: Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) â From your title, your subject was the bare trees of winter. The photo shows that. You had three sight lines to choose from â viewed from the left tree line, from the center, and from the right side. I hope you took all three. Iâve tried similar shots, and found that an off angle sometimes looks better. I find that the centered view is the best when there is a subject or target at the point of convergence. I donât see it here. But this center line works ok â and you have everything well centered. I also like how you got close to the ground for the shot.
(2) BACKGROUND - I like how you chose a fair amount of negative space at the top. It works very well.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL â The near trees are in good focus. The far ones are a tad blurred. Iâd recommend a smaller aperture, say f/11, and a tripod.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL â The only minor change I see would be to crop out the small white paper centered in the foreground. I question whether this would have worked better in B&W. The green grass is ânot winterâ with the leaves down.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO â A good photo which could have been improved (I think) with a different choice of shot angle.
Jim msp
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| 01/21/2003 05:50:32 PM |
Uptown Park Blvdby jab119Comment by RiderGal: This looks like Houston? just curious... it looks like you exposed for a little too long, and maybe should have used a tripod if you didn't. |
| 01/20/2003 06:12:54 PM |
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| 01/20/2003 11:05:15 AM |
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| 01/20/2003 02:21:43 AM |
Uptown Park Blvdby jab119Comment by briphoto: I think it's a nice photo, I would rate it higher than I am if it weren't for the intense glare from the streetlight and traffic light |
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