Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by maoriveros:
Not suitable

Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by casie:
i had this same idea and no one would use it. unfortunately, this is the harsh reality of 'lines' -- and you even made it fit the title, 'lines ii' -

Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by sevilduvarci:
nice composition, i like the tones.

Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by Blackbox:
<0

Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by quiche:
Scene needs better lighting.

Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by jgm5015:
should have used powdered sugar ;-)

Rock Bottom Line
by commendatori

Comment by tolovemoon:
Woah! Really putting it out there! Its a rock bottom for sure...
Your lighting is a little yellow, but the white in everything looks good.
I do like how how it all makes the eye go around the page from the roll of money to the straight and then to the lighter. Good image for a say no to drugs campain.. Peace!

Curves
by commendatori

Comment by Bosborne:
This is a beautiful photo. I would die to have that skin! Very nice detail and lighting. Just one critique tho. Her upper left shoulder looks a little strange, but other than that, I wouldn't change a thing. Great 4th place win!

Curves
by commendatori

Comment by SDW:
From the Critique Club

A very nice low key image. The lighting is very good along with the focus. Your subject works well in the center of the photograph and shadows of the models body contours enhances the appeal. Very visual friendly.

If I had one spot of the image that I wish the lighting would give more detail would be the arms. Compared to the legs and lower back the light on the arms are very thin and minimal. Other than that a technically sound photograph done in a tasteful manor.

Good job!

I hope you find this critique helpful.
Thanks,
SDW

Curves
by commendatori

Comment by lynnesite:
Congrats on your finish, beautifully done. I bet there were many that tottered off to your portfolio looking for more! ;-)