Tasty Shapesby
ShermyComment by _eug: **** Greeting from the Critique Club ****
Okay first impression at voting and now: Very cheesy, pun intended.
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Challenge
- Relevant to the Challenge? Yes
- Is subject unique (vs. unoriginal or rehashed)? Yes
Compostion
- Good or Bad? How can it be fixed? The use of ?construction paper? meats on the pizza seems to be an attempt at humor that I don't quite understand. I can empathize as I have a very dry sense of humor and think that I am funny when others disagree. I like tha off centered plate, although I might have turned the pizza crust down and right to make it easier to grab. ;)
- Good use of Depth of Field? Yes
- Good focus? Yes
Lighting
- Good use of light? Yes. The reflection give dimension to the plate, however maybe soften the lighting a little.
- Good use of shadows? Unfortunately ther are no shadows with this viewpoint.
Aesthetics/Artistic Appeal:
- Colors and Contrast. I would have to say that the plate and pepperoni's are not the same color is the first thing that I notice. It bothers me, but maybe I am a bit anal about these things. Change the plate. Go with purple or white or something different. To keep the eye from judging the differences.
- Sharpness. Nicely done.
- What is my reaction or feelings? I don't get it, to be honest. Which shape am I evaluating? The plate? The pizza? The pepperoni? I think it's the last, but I am not certain.