World upside downby
nagymelisComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
I don't really see a main focal point here. I want to say that it's the branch to the right, however, my eyes aren't really drawn there at all.
The lighting looks good. Looks like it was a great day to take photos. Nice sky, nice color in the sky. the other colors don't seem to compliment the sky much though. Muted greens. I wonder if you boosted some saturation on the greens just a bit if this would help slightly to make it look like everything wasn't dying.
The birds flying around are too small in this version to make an interesting subject, and therefor are also a bit of a distraction. Looks almost like dust on the lens or something.
Horizon appears tilted, however, the branch and the poles in the background are straight, so that is a bit confusing.
I like the angle and crop you chose. I think that having the little leaves in the bottom in the forground makes for something interesting to frame the shot with.
While this is a beautiful scene, it lacks focus and color in the bottom half. I would like more details, and somehow draw some attention to the branch which for the challenge should be the main subject.
looks like a great place to go to gather your thoughts. nice and peaceful.
~Heather~
