Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by hanneke:
I think a little more contrast would improve this one. nice framing

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by Tammer:
My favorite part of your photo is the boy leaping in the air. I wish the entire photo had a bit more color or saturation, as the grass and landscape appear somewhat muted.

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by KiwiShotz:
Good celebration, the image communicates it without a caption. Your difficulty is with the elements being so far apart that you have had to include a lot of other stuff that detracts from the image. Ther action though is terrific

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by Maverick:
Stronger focus on the person celebrating might help this imho.

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by Falc:
Very strangely structured image. Your title makes me think that the kid jumping is whaere I should be looking, but he's placed too near the edge of frame to be the real subject. The other two kids have faces turned away and so neither of them can provide the main subject for me. So that leaves the ball, but that tends to get lost against the complex background.

Nope my eye still keeps jumping around all those places it just won't rest.

Try to keep an image simple, provide one place for the eye to rest on. In this case simply the kid jumping in close-up would have been my choice of image.

Hope that means something, and you don't see it as simply dissing your image.

Parents Pride of Winning Team - Victory Run
by brens29

Comment by chnkymlk:
my favorite part about soccer tournaments!

Parents Pride of Winning Team - Victory Run
by brens29

Comment by fstop28:
Love the focal point in back of the "blurred" audience.

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by MAK:
Goalie didnt even see it until it was in the back of the net... defender scored it too..

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by tpoc:
great moment to capture! i'd love to see this picture with richer colors.

Celebrating a Goal - Jumping for Joy
by brens29

Comment by Germaine:
Colors look washed out.