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"Healthy" Eating
11/15/2005 09:18:40 PM
"Healthy" Eating
by AzCKelly

Comment by nborton:
looks a bit oversharpened, but i still like the idea.
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"Healthy" Eating
11/15/2005 02:57:37 PM
"Healthy" Eating
by AzCKelly

Comment by mk:
This shot doesn't seem to lend itself well to the triptych layout. There's no obvious reason for or improvement from the separation of shots and the hand being chopped in half feels somewhat awkward. Also, the images do not line up properly and the Hershey bar seems to be quite a bit oversharpened.
"Healthy" Eating
11/15/2005 11:56:55 AM
"Healthy" Eating
by AzCKelly

Comment by riolobo:
How does the division of your picture into three frames enhance the photo? How does this "tell...a story or illustrates a concept or object" better than the original image?
Recycle
11/14/2005 09:37:11 PM
Recycle
by AzCKelly

Comment by kenskid:
Great color.
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"Healthy" Eating
11/14/2005 05:01:45 PM
"Healthy" Eating
by AzCKelly

Comment by jpeters:
I like the sharpness of the carpet, but on the Hershey bar it appears that the image is much too oversharpened.
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"Healthy" Eating
11/14/2005 03:44:29 PM
"Healthy" Eating
by AzCKelly

Comment by sevilduvarci:
this somehow reminds me 70s adds.. well-done.
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Not the DEAD End of a Match Stick....yet!
11/14/2005 02:20:24 PM
Not the DEAD End of a Match Stick....yet!
by AzCKelly

Comment by LeeD:
Your timing on this shot was impeccable. The color of the flame is great, but the lighting on the matchstick is rather flat. I agree with Rikki on the border. The focus is OK but seems a little soft. I also feel the gray background is rather bland and a black background could give more "punch". One other small nitpick is the wordiness of the title. Personally I prefer short titles (for the most part). Your title seems like an attempt to force the image to fit the challenge.
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Not the DEAD End of a Match Stick....yet!
11/14/2005 02:14:41 PM
Not the DEAD End of a Match Stick....yet!
by AzCKelly

Comment by DrAchoo:
I haven't looked at other comments so if I'm repeating, then it's how I feel. :) First, I think you did very well with a difficult subject to capture. Flame is always hard to get right. With that being said I think the following hurt your score:

1) The DNMC crew may not have liked this. I'm pretty liberal, but this is a bit of a stretch. It's "out-of-the-box" which can be great, but like I've said before, high risk/high reward.

2) The flame is supersaturated which makes it less interesting. The colors are beautiful, but there is little detail there and the resultant rounded edges make it look less like flame and more like a glow of something.

3) The composition isn't bad at all. I may have actually had the match enter the frame centered and then let the gradual slope move the subject away from the middle. In other words, I may have just shifted the subject down. Rule of thirds is good and all, but sometimes it doesn't work and I think when you have a completely black background centered often works better.

4) Did you use optical zoom for this? It seems just a tiny bit jaggy. Not bad though.

5) I will totally commend you for the lighting on the matchstick. You managed to light that quite well while still controlling for the light of the flame. That is tough.

So bottom line is a fairly well done technical picture which likely fell with the DNMC crowd. (Note the 13 3-scores). The saturation may have been overboard. You did well though with a very difficult to photograph subject.
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Recycle
11/13/2005 06:55:31 PM
Recycle
by AzCKelly

Comment by Gallatin:
Very colorful, nice shot
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Not the DEAD End of a Match Stick....yet!
11/12/2005 10:18:09 PM
Not the DEAD End of a Match Stick....yet!
by AzCKelly

Comment by GolferDDS:
Your exposure is very good. I like the color of the flame.
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