Cats Eyes
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Comment by jimness:
Looks like you've increased green saturation; unfortunately it's affected other parts of the image too...I would try to alter the hue of the other colours slightly which can help you avoid this.

Cats Eyes
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Comment by h2:
nose shouldn't be yellow

Cats Eyes
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Comment by sherpet:
Good cat close-up.....

View from Under the Bridge - Take Two
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Comment by Jason_Cross:
Wow the light is cool.

View from Under the Bridge - Take Two
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Comment by HornOUBet:
Nicely done...looks warm, even though it might not be....

View from Under the Bridge - Take Two
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Comment by Krisby:
im sorry but this is just to abstract for me.. i don't understandi it..

View from Under the Bridge - Take Two
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Comment by rayg544:
A little blow out from the lights, but that's not a big problem. Nice work! 8

Morning
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Comment by rex:

Critique Club

First impression is this could be a real good photo if it wasn't so dark on the left side. On technical merit though it is really good. We all know a plane is a hrd place to photo. This is a good self portrait under those conditions. Nice DOF, nice focus. The detail in the skin is great. Composition is also good. The only problem I see with the background is that there are some marks on the wall behind you that makes me wonder what it is and kinda takes my attention away from your subject.

Stolen Kiss
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Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Doesn't seem quite to fit the challenge .. and there is an issue with the lighting ...

Composition:
Interesting with the two of them in the same part of the frame ... cropping hte lower part of the frame removes the lighting distraction and may have helped ... creating the impression of seeing more of the females face.

Subject:
Not sure if it meets the challenge ... but is a lovely shot ...

"Photograph a portrait that says something about the subject within the framework of their own environment."

Technical (Colour and light):
Here are some of the issues ... the bottom of the skirt is lit well .. and the wall behind them is lit along with her arm ... but there seens to be a need to light her and emphasise what she is doing there ....

To grow its vote?:
Think about the challenge in an exact manner and then go and shoot .. this is a great shot just not a natural environment ... is a great shot for before a dance .. or something like that ...

Summary:
Godo work .. you have a great eye and an awesome portfolio building up .. keep it up.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Morning
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Comment by Qart:
Nice and moody with a very unique approach. Nice job!