theseboots.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by lonewolf:
Very nice...um...boots. Seriously, I like the shot in black and white and it is a good/different angle. Good work.

pinkcorset954.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by Postgate1:
bring that hand around front with the other, and have the modle turn alittle more to her left side.

pinkcorset.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by Rikki:
I kinda like the pose on this one better. Maybe a tigher crop so that the chin is not part of the image perhaps? The focus seems too soft as well and not as sharp but I prefer this one over the first image :)

pinkcorset954.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by Rikki:
The pose on this shot seems a bit weird with the hands on the backside. Not quite sure what the purpose of having it back there would be. Maybe if it were on the hips then I would vote this one over the other.

stare 2.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by JunieMoon:
Love the watery effect on this one. It is so ethereal. Nice toning on the black and white as well.

pinkcorset.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by ace flyman:
Pretty sexy, looks like the white balance is off a little. Nice work.

Allura
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Hi Napalm Nymph...

I think the pose in this photograph has some nice potential. There are several items that bother me here... 1 - The composition with the model's arm clipped/cropped out of the frame on the right feels extremely uncomfortable and cramped. 2 - the lighting creates an unnaturally warm background along with an uneven light temperature on her face. One side of her face is cooler than the other. 3 - the final issue is the lack of sharpness, probably due to camera shake or motion blur with the length of exposure you had (1/10") for this photo. This says that you need more available or artificial light to create a situation where you could get a faster shutter speed. At 1/10", a tripod won't help much because if your model moves in the least, it will create the same problem...

Keep up the good efforts :)

John Setzler

portraitoutake4f.jpg
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by Jutilda:
HEE HEE - I like the animated expression. Nice tonality and composition too.

Allura
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by Canadian_eh:
I like it! good tones, it looks a bit too staged for me though, but i like it! good job!

Allura
by Napalm Nymph

Comment by elee3009:
Interesting colours - goes with the expression of the model.