Divine Leviathanby
KitKatComment by dahkota: Greetings from the Critique Club!
When requesting critiques on images, please include all shooting information possible (aperture, ISO, shutter). This will enable the critiquer to respond with a more in depth critique.
Since I do not know anything about the conditions in which you took this image, this critique will not be able to touch on that. When taking an image, there are certain things to take into consideration: Composition, lighting,tonal balance, point of view, depth of field, focus.
Composition: I think the composition works in this image. Some argue for a less centered composition but I'm not sure that would serve the image well. I like the space this composition provides. If you expanded the image to include more on the top and right, the subject would be smaller and I think that would detract at this size. However, when printing at a larger size, you might consider that.
Lighting: I think the lighting works. It provides depth, giving highlights to the water.
Tonal balance: The image is a little flat due to lack of contrast. This could easily be fixed in any editing SW. Currently, the image looks slightly foggy - a bump in contrast would remedy this.
Point of View: The point of view works for this image.
Depth of field: everything that needs to be in focus in this image is. Since I do not know your shooting conditions, I cannot comment on any adjustments you might have made.
Focus: Focus works for subject
I think your stop action capture was well done and well timed.
With regard to the challenge:
As one voter said, they knocked you down a point for the title. You will always have voters like this and there were probably dozens more who did the same thing. To score higher, follow the challenge rules exactly. It mentioned D&L; I would have found something that was D&L. Not saying that's the best thing for the image, just a method to achieve a higher score. A bump in contrast would also achieve a higher score. DPC voters prefer contrasty images: blacks and whites (notice the number of comments that referred to black and white). I don't think that this image would be improved in B&W however. The blues tones really work here. I think the two suggestions here would have given your score a .5+ boost.
If you have any questions or comments regarding this critique, please do not hesitate to PM me.