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| 05/08/2006 05:13:51 PM |
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| 05/08/2006 01:53:34 PM |
Palistinians go to Work in West Bank and Gaza againby GunnsiComment by xianart: Hi Gunssi, from christian, ctp2
First Impression
A very striking image, clean and simple, yet powerful for all that.
Composition:
very good. the crane in the background is very effective, with the atmospheric perspective. the small lights in the distance help to create a feeling of isolation and loneliness. the way the horizon line extends in the background hill works very well.
Technical:
i'm not sure about the purple. i think i'd have liked a slightly more realistic sky colour. also, there seem to be some jpeg artifacts happening around the edges of objects, that i'm sure can be corrected (but i don't know how - change how you save???)
My opinion:
a very strong image indeed. i gave it a 7 in voting. well done.
cheers, gunnsi,
c. Message edited by author 2006-05-10 19:01:37. |
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| 05/08/2006 11:17:06 AM |
Driving People Crazyby GunnsiComment by Elvis_L: a very blair witch feel. I like the concept. the title and image work together fairly well. I don't care for the blue hue, maybe a darker yellow hue would work better. the eye should be bloodshot to show more of a crazy feel. the hair could be crazier and take up some of the space in between the logo and the subject. |
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| 05/08/2006 08:50:09 AM |
Palistinians go to Work in West Bank and Gaza againby GunnsiComment by margiemu: This is a very cool looking shot. I love the silohuette idea. Very striking. It looks 'early morning' to me. The lights in the background give it some depth. The compostion works really well with the worker walking towards the 'machine' (I never can tell the difference between cranes, excavators, backhoes etc Ã). I don't have any ideas on what to improve here - love the shot the way it is. |
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| 05/08/2006 08:11:59 AM |
Palistinians go to Work in West Bank and Gaza againby GunnsiComment by alexgarcia: Very nice shot and good score, Gunnar.
Composition is very dynamic, with your elements well distributed in the image, but to me there too much black in the image, maybe you could capture a bit of detail in your subject.
About the colors, good use of silhouettes in black and color of BG.
To improve: It seems you had some problems in the jpeg conversion because there are some visible artifacts, not very sure why.
Overall, a nice image that needs, IMO, more details in the subject.
Ãlex |
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| 05/08/2006 03:20:32 AM |
Driving People Crazyby GunnsiComment by hotpasta: what I am looking for in this challenge is for a creative 'wow' shot that would go on a movie poster. I think that's what the challenge is all about...this is excellent and looks great as a duotone. It has that psycho look about it |
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| 05/08/2006 01:29:55 AM |
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| 05/08/2006 12:51:17 AM |
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| 05/07/2006 07:36:14 PM |
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| 05/07/2006 06:24:18 PM |
Sunbathingby GunnsiComment by DigiFotoBuddy: Greetings from your own critique club.
First Impression
Nice shot.
Composition:
Very good composition.
Subject:
I think Orage and dark blue are Complementary colors. That may be one os the reason for not getting higher score.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lighting is little bit harse on the orange.
Improvement:
Soft lighting on the orange, What's that on the right bottom corner? It's bit distracting
Summary:
The colors are not complementary, IMO. I scored it 6. Message edited by author 2006-05-07 18:24:42. |
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