Untitled
by nemesise1977

Comment by MacDonald:
great textures - looks like it could be on the back of a horse :)

Kodak Moments
by nemesise1977

Comment by JunieMoon:
Very well executed. Your focus is really clear and your exposure is also very good. Overall, the composition seemed lacking. There are two subjects of interest, the screw hole on the left and the tilted L on the right. Perhaps a better crop to get rid of one of the elements would have made a better abstract. I would say to crop out the left part of the image, and increase the amount of the right of the image to show more of the lines.

Kodak Moments
by nemesise1977

Comment by nlghttrain:
there is nothing really drawing my attention into this shot

Kodak Moments
by nemesise1977

Comment by KiwiShotz:
Interesting, kind of gave it away with the title. I wonder why you didn't rotate to get the verticals correct. It sort of looks sloppy and therefore not planned or cared about

Stun Gun Art
by nemesise1977

Comment by DrAchoo:
To me, and I'm not an abstract affecianado, abstracts are about either color or pattern. Here the color is nice (I like that color blue) but monotone and the pattern is chaotic. I bet you would have done better by firing the shot in a more geometric fashion. I'm not saying to perfectly line things up, but perhaps have them all oriented vertically or horizontally, or have them progress in a pattern as the move across the canvas.

Blue mood
by nemesise1977

Comment by DrAchoo:
This is a tough shot. I like that you are experimenting and not afraid to try some stuff. This is a real balancing act between having too much detail (and ruining the effect) and having too little (and making for a boring picture). I'd probably like to see a bit more detail or at least a bit more contrast. I'd also compose the shot with the negative space in front of the face and not behind it. I think it would be more appealing that way (even a centered composition might work). I gave it a 4 in the challenge and I think the biggest reason was there just wasn't enough to hold my interest. Keep being creative though, it's a tough thing to do, and it will come with some lumps, but it will make you a better photographer in the end.

Blue mood
by nemesise1977

Comment by graphicfunk:
Cool! 7

Stun Gun Art
by nemesise1977

Comment by KHolt:
you might have got away with this photo more in the abstract or blue challenges, it really isn't pleasing on the eye

Blue mood
by nemesise1977

Comment by Caillie:
A bit too dark to see the mood of the person.

Stun Gun Art
by nemesise1977

Comment by IceRock:
to dark !