GoGirlGo!
by gsal

Comment by dtremain:
Great expressions, but the ball-only right pane just doesn't work for me. The first two frames show a girl, then the right one shows just a ball - not what I would expect. Even if the center pane had the ball in it, it would make more sense. Good lighting. Picture frame in background is distracting in middle and right panes.

GoGirlGo!
by gsal

Comment by dafletchr:
I like how my eye moves through this presentation. Nice black and white.

GoGirlGo!
by gsal

Comment by ELLIPS:
Both extreme crops are strange, unbalanced; the central image is fine, the triptych not particularly attractive. 6 for the creativity.

GoGirlGo!
by gsal

Comment by disassociation:
great tones!

Youth
by gsal

Comment by CNovack:
The image grain, B& W presentation, and the off kilter angle of this young girl gives this a very artsy type feel. A quick capture of a fleeting moment is what the mood feels - I get that from the angle this is presented in. Love the B&W treatment - the feelings of nostalgia and 'a captured moment in time to be cherished' would not work in color I feel. I didn't know what the object was in the top left corner til I read the description. The partial soccer ball is odd - I wonder how it would have looked with the full ball there and would it have detracted attention from the young girl.

Youth
by gsal

Comment by pawdrix:
I gave you a 9. I hope you're NOT listening to the folks complaining about the dark thing on the top left. It's a silly thing to mention let alone be distracted by...unless the viewer has ADD and can't focus on a great subject.

Youth
by gsal

Comment by Paul:
Now that I know this is a soccer ball - it is so obvious!! I think it's because I saw the very top left corner as background and not part of the object. I still love the image though!

Message edited by author 2009-10-08 07:39:16.

Youth
by gsal

Comment by bvy:
Great stolen moment. The grain works well.

Youth
by gsal

Comment by NikonJeb:
I like everything about this except whatever that is up in the left upper corner......7

Horse With No Name
by gsal

Comment by Jutilda:
WOW - what a killer illustration of that classic America song!! I remember taking a long drive with a friend across west Texas and that song was on the stereo.