Safe in the bedroom
by shamrock

Comment by MrXpress:
Nice shot (and great subject, obviously), and I know this would be next to impossible to correct or make better, but to me it almost looks like it was taken out of a garage door. Still is good for a 6 in my book.

Queso con azul
by shamrock

Comment by Kathy:
Yummm. bowl and dip could have been a little less blurred. 7

Queso con azul
by shamrock

Comment by raish:
Blue and yellow...

Queso con azul
by shamrock

Comment by Krisby:
sure like to know what that is! but about the photo.. sorry but i think that you might be better of if it wasn't so close up..

Safe in the bedroom
by shamrock

Comment by SandyP:
WOW!!!!!!! What an amazing capture! I am so impressed by the capture of lightning. Something I've always wanted to do! Great job.

Safe in the bedroom
by shamrock

Comment by mpeters:
Wow! great lightning strike and shot.

Badges from the Open Road
by shamrock

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Makes me wonder about the places this photographer hangs out ... what a great capture.

Composition:
The crop may be the issue ... but this may be all you had to work with .. your commentators have mentioned several improvements .. try them out and see how that goes.

Subject:
Meets the challenge well ...

Technical (Colour and light):
She is not as sharp as him .. but then again .. what you gonna do go up and say hold still so I can take this picture .. you did good with what you got ...

To grow its vote?:
Add a little brightness play a little more with contrast ... and just keep learning from each thing you do ... that is the best way to learn.

Summary:
Good luck good shooting .. and keep it up.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Safe in the bedroom
by shamrock

Comment by kiwiness:
Caught the moment here that's for sure!

Badges from the Open Road
by shamrock

Comment by JBHale:
GAH!! She's out of focus!!

Badges from the Open Road
by shamrock

Comment by Zeissman:
maybe black and white and more contrast?