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| 09/30/2005 05:26:40 PM |
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| 09/29/2005 10:54:20 AM |
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| 09/29/2005 10:12:51 AM |
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| 09/28/2005 03:11:55 PM |
Speedby swm4lfe_2001Comment by glad2badad: Nice use of diagonal lines in your composition. Sky looks good for color. The image is crisp, well focused, and exposed. Good work. |
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| 09/28/2005 05:00:48 AM |
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| 09/18/2005 11:34:18 PM |
Boring Branch, Beautiful Backgroundby swm4lfe_2001Comment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Technique
You have used the dramatic lighting to your advantage in this shot by capturing the "rays" and using a form of backlighting to silhoette the branches. That sets up a nice contrast, and makes the sky look even brighter. Looking at your settings, I wonder if you could have used a lower aperture value and faster shutter speed. I think that might have made the branches appear more in focus simply because the slight blur they have looks as if the wind was blowing or something.
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Compositionally, I think there might be a bit too much "dark" on the left of the shot. I think cropping a bit on the right and left, would make the composition seem more balanced, and complete.
You don't mention any post-processing, but it looks to me like you upped the contrast a bit, and it may have affected the clouds a bit too much -- there are spots on them that are a bit overblown, it seems.
My first impression is that this shot is a bit out of focus. Unfortunately, when viewing hundreds of shots, the first impression is usually what gets to determine the vote. The composition seems a bit accidental, and the clouds are a bit blown out in areas. Had a voted in this challenge, I probably would have given you a 4 (for the aforementioned reasons), and maybe a 5 because you did an excellent job of capturing the "rays" which is not always easy.
Best to you in future challenges.
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| 09/13/2005 11:26:36 PM |
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| 09/13/2005 10:51:47 PM |
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