"Blow Man Blow"
by phylsy7

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Kids dancing to music can make for great photos, the composition lets this down though. The trumpeter is too near the top edge of the frame and everything feels unbalanced. I do think this could have benefited from observing rule of thirds. Stepping back and placing the trumpeter and kid on thirds junctions would have made it much stronger. Not fond of the sepia effect. Nothing is in focus enough. Why the square crop? It hasn't helped you here, and you'd do better to get the right composition straight out of the camera.

Somebody Is Soaked
by phylsy7

Comment by UNCLEBRO:
Perhaps a tighter crop on the umbrella?

Somebody Is Soaked
by phylsy7

Comment by Spork99:
the green grass is very distracting to me

Somebody Is Soaked
by phylsy7

Comment by Jutilda:
Simple. Love the composition and negative space of the concrete area.

Somebody Is Soaked
by phylsy7

Comment by Strikeslip:
Sweet! Love the humour!

Somebody Is Soaked
by phylsy7

Comment by ergo:
funny shot. poor umbrella, poor somebody. I feel this would have been very effective with a crop off the top parts and a more landscape view. 6

Waiting for Work Depression Era 1929-1939
by phylsy7

Comment by blondmcfly:
You should have cropped a little more off the right.

Waiting for Work Depression Era 1929-1939
by phylsy7

Comment by mandyturner:
this would have rec a higher vote from me if you would have used real people.

Waiting for Work Depression Era 1929-1939
by phylsy7

Comment by yanko:
Nice.

Waiting for Work Depression Era 1929-1939
by phylsy7

Comment by RinkRat:
Very cool