Can I Throw and Make it From Here?
by phylsy7

Comment by GrayGhost:
Good question, but could use something more, like a real attempt [by the model]? [Capturing the right motion might make the shot.]


Message edited by author 2005-11-16 09:53:42.

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by Philos:
Could do with a bit more crispness.

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by Antanas:
Good idea to use window frame as a natural border. Unfortunately, quite ordinary, non eye-catching composition outside...5

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by UNTITLED:
Nice idea for triptych, you set the scene well. The divisions between the photos seem just too chunky though.

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by tonyv:
Great idea. Might have been worth cloning out the handle.

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by nerdynotdirty:
i love the natural border! great shot!

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by Falc:
OK, now this is going to be difficult to comment on without sounding very harsh.
The whole image has a 'pink' tinge, which should have been corrected in post processing.
The image has no real central theme except for window frames you used to form the three panels.

Toll Booth Triptych
by phylsy7

Comment by Prof_Fate:
I know this meets the challenge, but I am not a big fan on just cutting up one nice shot into 3 with distracting borders. Seems to easy, no real creativity required. This is the first one i've seen with no outside border. makes me feel the divisions are just part of the window you are looking out - reduces the illusion of a tryptich.

Can I Throw and Make it From Here?
by phylsy7

Comment by Ivory:
Like the angle adds to the interest.

Can I Throw and Make it From Here?
by phylsy7

Comment by KarenNfld:
I am not fond of the angle, also your focus seems off.