Balance of Egg-Cellence
by stphq

Comment by sherpet:
This is so cool, and a great idea simply done and very effective.....

Balance of Egg-Cellence
by stphq

Comment by DarkRider:
What a perfect setup. White on white would have been a 10. This is still good for an 8 from me. Best of luck. Scott

Balance of Egg-Cellence
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Comment by lemeryj:
Neat concept.

good friends
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Comment by PGerst:
Good, but a bit too close to the backdrop. Pulling them away would help the shadows a little...

good friends
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Comment by Patsfan:
Good b/w shot but a little bit blurry.

good friends
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Comment by bobnospum:
Nice pose and composition. Perhaps move the girls farther away form the back ground to lessen the dark shadow.

good friends
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Comment by jgrieco:
flash is throwing some harsh shadows

try bouncing flash instead

good friends
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Comment by isonaj:
I think this is a little soft and could possibly use a tighter crop so the girls are more of the shot. Introducing some distance between the subject and the background and having a tighter DOF would help blur the background. I love the pose and general idea.

good friends
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Comment by chrisgoddard:
very important to show life in the eyes of your subject. Even if you dont have studio lighting, try to be resourceful and bring some natural light or even a lamp without the shade on it.

good friends
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Comment by bspurgeon:
Lovely smiles. I like the soft focus. Maybe they could be closer together. The flash cast a terrible shadow, and overall the image is too dark and flat. If you want an unsolicited suggestion, I've found that the omnibounce diffuser works great for this type of shot, i.e. for folks without fancy lights, like me. You need a real flash though, I suspect this is the on board flash. Also, move the young ladies further away from the backdrop.