coffee shop...camera..sun glasses...bored
by sajin

Comment by Jutilda:
HEE HEE. I don't like the lengthy title, but this is a cute shot and interesting and unexpected.

coffee shop...camera..sun glasses...bored
by sajin

Comment by jadin:
There's something about this. I just can't put my finger on it, but I really like it. 10

in the garden
by sajin

Comment by xtabintun:
I dunno, the problem I have with this one is that albeit it could very well represent your corner of the world, I am left clueless as to where that is. This picture could represent thousands upon thousands of places around the world and I'm left wondering about how it uniquely defines the area, on whatever scale, in which you live.

in the garden
by sajin

Comment by philup:
nice macro...love the detail and color..good job!

reaching for a stormy sky
by sajin

Comment by ltuddenham001:
nice pic, i think it would've been an even stonger image had you cropped out the majority of the foreground and contrasted the red flowers against the textured clouds.

reaching for a stormy sky
by sajin

Comment by elpy:
the top of the image is more poweful than the bottom, i really like the red against the stromy sky...but the bottom is just too distracting

reaching for a stormy sky
by sajin

Comment by Xilebo:
This kind of sky looks really familiar, like this photo alot!

reaching for a stormy sky
by sajin

Comment by Geee:
An engaging photo, I'd like it even better with the bottom quarter cropped.

reaching for a stormy sky
by sajin

Comment by Car54:
I like the lighting (flash?) on this contrasting the textured sky.. I think the bushes are the weakest elements, but overall good capture.

The Sparkle Of Innocence
by sajin

Comment by Ivo:
CRITIQUE CLUB

Hi Bobby. Great shot. You've captured the essence of what these little creatures are all about. I have a daughter about the same age. As far as the image goes, there are several things I really like and some I think could use enhancement. The expression is priceless and the tones are quite gentle. Your lighting was well done and the focus is golden. I'm a little thrown off of the placement of your subject but you may have been stuck by not having the room to allow more room in your original. I also find that the hardwood floor could have been darkened since it is a bland background. Though I like borders, it has crept into the shot and empasized the weak placement of the image. I'd try cropping tighter on the left to compensate for that. This would eliminate some of the background as well.

All in all, it is a great capture as your sore has clearly indicated. Go get more now ......... and tell her to go clean her room!! ;-)

Ivo



Message edited by author 2005-09-23 13:48:37.