Crescent
by louisdv

Comment by Caine:
The skewed frame does nothing for the picture at all, and doesn't relate to it in any way. The lighting is odd with the line of sunlight across the top of the picture. Nothing is in focus. The theme seems uninspiring, it's a crescent shape alright, but that's all it is, just like an untidy pile of kids trainers on your lawn.

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by rlinn3:
Too much noise, needs a tighter crop and better contrast IMHO. 6

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by TheresaA:
Nice clear picture.

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by abimalech:
A tighter crop to take out the cars on the left and the people standing on the right. Also looks a bit grainy.

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by BIGPOLEHERBEAR:
too bright

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by theSaj:
a touch washed out

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by pacpinto:
Not the greatest of compositions and background. Maybe you should have tried to capture an instrument's detail or something.

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Looks like a snapshot. There are many interesting possibilities in a shot like this... such as lying on the floor as they walk past, or getting loads of sticks together with shallow dof if shooting from the side. This is unimaginative. The pole growing out of the leader's head is the icing on the cake.

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by bcoble:
Appears to be overexposed.

Parade
by louisdv

Comment by vtruan:
really grainy for a sunny day. Overprocessing?