Hawaiian Blues
by ShannonLee

Comment by electina:
The focus feels a little soft here.

Hostage
by ShannonLee

Comment by PhantomEWO:
And all I have in my rafters are racoons and possums ... dang!

Hostage
by ShannonLee

Comment by anaheimca89:
weird

Hawaiian Blues
by ShannonLee

Comment by TheHummer:
Too much negative space, closer crop on the flower would have brought out what looks like some incredible detail.

Hawaiian Blues
by ShannonLee

Comment by jah_luv:
Good Job!

SMILE :oD
by ShannonLee

Comment by Jason_Cross:
COol puppy.

SMILE :oD
by ShannonLee

Comment by Blue Moon:
cutie pie!

Peter Pan Meets iPod
by ShannonLee

Comment by Phil:
Greeting from the Critique Club Shannon!

Congrats on your 3rd highest score to date.

I like this image and am fond of how the lines in the shed distort the areas of the shadow. I also think the use of open space was a nice touch. The tones are pleasing as well.

I guess what I would critique would be just a few small points. The shadows to the right and left of the subject are a bit distracting. For an image like this to really pop you want to see the color or background lead right up to the model's shadow. The other thing I'd like to mention is the very top right corner. While it is not a huge distraction I think it could've been cropped out.

Overall a great shot!

Thanks for the opportunity to critique this photo Shannon!

Cheers - Phil

Peter Pan Meets iPod
by ShannonLee

Comment by mpeters:
NIce job, good color tones and nice sharp shadows.

Peter Pan Meets iPod
by ShannonLee

Comment by pineapple:
The background is a nice colour and the tone is great. My only suggestion would have been to have the model more central and compose the photo around a frace profile and the body frontal dancing with (important) the iPod cable clearly visible (which it is not in this photo). The top of this photo is not contributing enough to the image.