Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by Arcanist:
Its gritty and raw. I like it.

Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by carpal:
Well done - lovely photo.

Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by LeeD:
There is a contradiction in this image for me. The model seems to be relaxing, but her expression is one of distraction. The post-processing takes on almost a grunge feeling which doesn't tie in with the message you are trying to portray. On the other hand, it is this contradiction that draws you more into the image and makes the viewer wonder... "What's on her mind?"

Light the Way
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Comment by vxpra:
Nice image. Had this not been minimal editing I would suggest burning the little reflection. Like the 'feel' of the image, well executed

Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by Shmee:
I really like this one. It almost seems like a candid. It seems really real.

Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by hanneke:
nice setting for a photo like this.

I think 'd like the eye looking to the cam more, you can see a lot of white of the eyes now.

Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by Pedro:
On a different subject, this processing would kick ass. It's gritty and edgy and I normally love that, but on a soft subject with a soft title, it is a bit conflicting. I like the pose and the crop very much - your model seems very at ease with herself and the camera which is either great acting or very admirable self-esteem. In either case, that comes through in the photo and it's very appealing.

beyond that, the technical aspects are good. the focus is soft and flattering, the lighting is nice (aside from the harsh shadows from the edit) and the crop frames the mood nicely. the fact that your model is adorable doesn't hurt either. ;)

a solid entry.

P

Simple Pleasures
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by darthsn:
she doesn't look like she's enjoying herself, doesn't match the title very well :)

Light the Way
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by JawnyRico:
Great idea and shot. I like the setup and work behind your shot. Nice work.

Light the Way
by HawesPhotoKC

Comment by Simpa:
great