Cast your light upon the watersby
VanGoghComment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting light pal, but overall lack of composition loses me quickly.
Composition:
My eye is left to wander everywhere. Not a very strong compsotion in my opinion.
Subject:
Not clear, because of the lack of composition.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Colour : very nice color and well exposed.
Focus: Looks pretty sharp.
Light: Well exposed and does add to the color.
To grow its vote?:
Composition oges a long way in the process of making a photo. Study Rule of Thirds ... and crop to make your compsotion stronger.
Summary:
Since you have left no Photographer's comments, I am left on my own to determine what you were trying to get here. I assume you were going for an abstract play on color. Technicals are good, but composition hurt you.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
