How Dirty Boys Get Clean.......
by madison461

Comment by LucidLotus:
Bubbly indeed. Doesn't draw me in as a viewer. The lighting is faded and its making the image a bit dulled out - I can't tell if the browner bubbles are because of dirt (as referenced by the title) or because of use of flash/lighting that's browned them out. Also its muting some of the details of the bubbles, focus is a bit soft too but that can work for you here. Border.. not a fan, the light grey/purple only enhances the washed out nature.

I think this could have had some real pop and impact if you used the body's natural form to your advantage. Highlight the curvature of the back and/or shoulders with a sheen of foamy bubbles and let the light trace that curve. Heck, could even get humorous and make a bubble diaper. Give the viewer something to take a second look at, right now its a bit flat and I have no inclination to lose myself in the image. I gave a 3.

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Comment by Bud:
It would be nice to isolate a head stone a bit.

How Dirty Boys Get Clean.......
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Comment by KiwiShotz:
Cute idea

How Dirty Boys Get Clean.......
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Comment by wavelength:
Thank you for covering the crack. Say no to crack.

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Comment by Silience:
I'm trying to understand what the idea behind this was, I take that is somes back... but it just looks like the start of a porno I saw once...

How Dirty Boys Get Clean.......
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Comment by Elaine:
Sorry, but I do not fine this interesting.

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Comment by elee3009:
Sobering but true. Not sure about why you chose to focus on the fancy iron rather than the cemetery.

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Comment by racha:
gross.

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Comment by xuan768:
Good idea but it's kinda grainy and not technically good. The lighting could have been enhanced to make the bubbles stick out more and get less noise.

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Comment by mandyturner:
a little dark, but it is a cemetary now itsn't it? Nice composition-7