Barman...
by fquintans

Comment by CLarson557:
Very good idea for the challenge. Composed well. Just needs better focus.

Barman...
by fquintans

Comment by Steveinnz:
IMO focus way to soft and coupled with the washed out black and white look results in an uninteresting photo, done in color and tack sharp this would be ribbon material. Good luck

Barman...
by fquintans

Comment by Goldwing_ed:
The idea is great! Too bad the quality of the image is not so good

Barman...
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Comment by theSaj:
good composition, good color/lighting, everything else needed work on this shot

The fury of the old black...
by fquintans

Comment by mandyturner:
*Critique Club*

For you choice of subject (old phone), you did good. But I can't for the life of me fiqure out why you did this effect to it? Your title makes me think that maybe you did this because you wanted to relate the message that the old phone was filled with fury? Huh?

I think that the main problem, and it is a big one, is that your entry does not make sense. The effect that you did riuned it. I love pictures that are different, don't get me wrong. But you should have just let the phone itself (focused) be the subject,....not a crazy phone filled with fury. You probably would have done pretty well.

Now you won the brown ribbon for this one. Don't be sad. There are more challenges and you can't do any worse. You can only get better from here.

Mandy

The fury of the old black...
by fquintans

Comment by tpoc:
this phone shot makes for an interesting abstract...

The fury of the old black...
by fquintans

Comment by srafferty:
What is this suppose to be???

The fury of the old black...
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Comment by marbo:
Not the best photo, but on the bright side there is no zero in the scoring :)

The fury of the old black...
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Comment by kawhona:
Interesting abstraction but, it doesn't speak to me in any way.

The fury of the old black...
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Comment by Ketch-up:
HEhe.