Rapunzel's Greatest Desireby
ndsComment by theSaj: ::: Critique Club ::: [The Saj]
First Impressions: Well done...
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Composition: Good composition. Well positioned with no real elements to distract.
Subject: Subject is well placed. However, the subject's eyes are not focused as well as they could be IMHO. They expose too much of the whites. Perhaps having the model look at a slightly different angle to reveal her iris' more.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): Nice tones in processing. Good focus and well lit. The tone of this foto gives a nice metallic "retro-modern" feel which goes well with the theme. Of note, a secondary light to reduce the shadow on the shoulder and to fill in the left eye a bit would be beneficial.
Creativity: A fun photo with a nice creative touch in processing.
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To improve?: An additional lightsource. That said, the ring from an artistic standpoint is a bit distracting. The color tone doesn't quite fit.
Summary: Well done, fun, and nicely exposed.
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It is my hope that these insights are helpful, and constructive. If you have any questions regarding this critique, please feel free to PM me. Also feel free to PM me with any feedback on this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so.
- Jason "The Saj"
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