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| 02/09/2003 08:34:58 PM |
The Unheardby AntithesisComment by Natasha: Critique Club
Composition-Content
A very unique and original idea, great picture! I like the way that you have framed the person in the square and in that way you have met the challenge. Content is great, which absolutely makes the picture, quite an eerie shot, the whole person at the window thing is staight out of a horror movie! Don't worry, not too much like a pig! The image of the person at the window is pretty abstract, but there is enough detail to show the viewer what it is.
Technical
Lighting is good here, enough light to capture the detail of the face. Perhaps the lighting on the window frame could be a bit brighter, especially as the square should be emaphasised to fit the challenge. Along the same lines, the focus is a little soft on the window frame, perhaps this could be a bit sharper. However, overall I think that focusing is good, this must have been pretty hard to focus.
My Opinion
A very creative and unique approach to the challenge, it is a bit too nightmarish for my taste, but I can really appreciate the idea behind it. I wonder what this would be like in B/W. Hope that the creativity continues to be let out! Good Luck in the next challenge |
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| 02/09/2003 07:15:35 PM |
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| 02/09/2003 09:48:41 AM |
Recycleby AntithesisComment by lisae: The composition of this is a little dull. A closer crop could have been better. A lot of the glass is in shadow, which makes it hard to distinguish from the dark background. Some more lighting from the left or front could have helped. |
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| 02/08/2003 08:41:35 PM |
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| 02/07/2003 07:37:33 PM |
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| 02/07/2003 10:52:03 AM |
The Unheardby AntithesisComment by Jacko: Ah man, you got short changed. I really liked this one ... one of my favorites by far. Looks like a lost soul caught in a square. Ah well, you got a 10 from me :) |
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| 02/06/2003 08:51:14 PM |
Fleowersby AntithesisComment by KimInNB: Gorgeous cat - could have stood being brushed before the photo. I like the background with the flowers - nice contrast against the muted colors of kitty. |
| 02/06/2003 03:16:31 PM |
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| 02/06/2003 10:33:07 AM |
Fleowersby AntithesisComment by Kaz: If I crop out the pink flowers, this is an outstanding pet portrait. But with the flowers, my eye is drawn over to them and away from what I believe is your main subject. JMO. :) |
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| 02/06/2003 10:24:59 AM |
Fleowersby AntithesisComment by tiff: that a great picture, good job. I like the way you have you subject in next to the flowers. Good job!! |
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