Image |
Comment |
| 10/20/2005 03:02:51 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 10/19/2005 08:53:47 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/23/2005 10:39:04 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/23/2005 10:33:30 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/12/2005 07:47:15 PM |
"Fun" with Shoesby Goldwing_edComment by Travis99: Greetings from the Critique Club
Hello my name is Travis and I will be critiquing you photo.
Lets start with composition, and background. First I would suggest a slightly higher camera angle, it seems like I am strugling to look at the shoes. The background can be just as inportant as the subject, always make sure you check you background in a shot. A simple way to do this is look through the viewfinder, close your eyes for 3 seconds then open them, all while still having your eye to the view finder, you will be suprised of the new things you see that you havent seen before.
Now lets look at the lighting, it seems to be a bit flat, try changing the angle of you light, use a flashlight or a desk lamp and and put you subject in different places in the light. Take note how the lighting can mold your subject giving it a dramatic or subtle feel.
Well thats it if you have any questions or comments please feel free to pm me. I hope I helped.
Travis |
| 09/11/2005 08:10:03 PM |
Door & Lightby Goldwing_edComment by Jutilda: Greetings from the Crique Club. :~D
This image has great potential, but with it's tight crop and limited area, it loses the impact I think you were going for. I'm noticing alot of distortion on the door but it could be my monitor, That is usually a result of over desaturation, although the color of the door doesn't appear to have that problem. I think if this door were in a large room and you were able to get some distance and negative space around it, there would be plenty of impact with such a simple image. There's really nothing there to give it the POW factor that makes high placements in the challenges. The title is certainly appropriate, but with the ability to use advanced editing in this challenge, you didn't use all of the resources available to really make this an interesting image.
From looking at some of your other photos, I know you have a great eye for detail, so keep up the good work. I hope you found some of these suggestions helpful! All the best, Judy |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/06/2005 11:29:35 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/06/2005 10:24:33 PM |
"Fun" with Shoesby Goldwing_edComment by Caine: This just seems annoying without the shoes being worn I'm afraid. And wouldn't they be bare feet considering they're under the covers? |
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/04/2005 05:18:42 AM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
| 09/03/2005 11:10:09 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 06/15/2025 05:50:57 AM EDT.